by Alexander
I love you my baby girl this poems is awosome i loved this poem but trust me this girl in the mirror she's most beautiful girl like you hunny dont think she's not no im glade i have you dont think never ever like that no you are so beautiful girl you have something more beautiful then anything in this world you have your heart any guy will be lucky to have a girl like you and im luckyest guy becoz ihave you i have my angel *hugs you* |
by SweetxMisery
=) this made a shiver go down my spine it really got to me. I love how you directed it towards every girl who may be reading it. This was really well done you got your point across well. Insecurities can really eat away at your soul..its a scary feeling to never feel good enough. |
by Caytlin
Hey. Im not really one of those girls that looks in the mirror && hates whut she sees but even the prettiest girl wishes she were someone else. Nothing is more beautiful than a girl who can appreciate herself for who she really is. Im sure your beautiful just the way you are. You dont need to change yourself to be liked. |
by Savanha
That hits hard... if its true then wow, we have a lot in common. I wish every night that one day i could be as pretty as someone. But then i wake up in the morning looking at the same face in the mirror. *tears*... WOW |
Wow. That was amazing. True. And did I say amazing? |
by LoreNz0
This poem is so beautiful and true =) |
by Gem
Comment #1 |
by TaNyabAbEE
Wow, i love this. i can really relate, cuz our school is all about popularity & all. it's terrible. most of my friends are like this. it's sad. but i love this poem, it's awesome!!!!!!!! keep writing, your poems are really really good!!!!!!! i give it 5/5!!! |
This is an amazingly inspiring poem. The whole mechanical aspect didn't even matter, it was that great. I loved it. 5/5. |
This one leaves me speachless. Great poem. And thanks for writing this poem. It's such an inspration for all... |
by uwouldntno
A smile? |
YOU KNOW WHAT?? I LOVE IT |
by shadowcat
That was so good. Perfectly described how many girls these days feel. And it rhymed too! |
by MARI
I love this poem especially how u werent afrid to admit that u have felt like that things like that make a poem so strong and wonderful |
by Bre Monique
I loved the ending to the poem. Although some of the lines sounded like you added them only to rhyme the majority of the poem was amazing. I loved that you wrote that all you need to wear is your best smile and not all the makeup to cover everything up. 4/5 |
by Beautifully Nothing
This is a very inspiring poem. and it is true, one good smile can light up a room. once again, rhyming and flow are right on. for any girl that thinks she is ugly...just remember, if you are good person and being the best you can be...you are one of the most beautiful girls in the world. |
Wow. that made me start crying rly.it was an amazing poem. it was amazing.. |
WONDERFULLY POWERFUL WRITE, SUPERLATIVE!!! |