by Nelle Jul 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She woke up one morning feeling ugly as can be. |
Good poem I liked it. it flowed pretty well better then your others. |
by Biscuit
Nice ending, bringing it all into perspective, good attempt at rhymin as well |
There is some very strong imagery in this one. I loved the 'bleeding mirrror' that is a wonderfully powerful image. |
by Therian
*The feeling it portrays is true |
by Therian
Beautifully Written; |