I loved this poem..the last stanza was by far my favorite..i cant really decide it this is sweet or sad..lol i got confused! but you showed a lot of emotions! you did a great job! 5/5

This is great..it is packed full of strong emoitions and I love the style and the way you worded it !! Great Job

5/5

God Bless

-CHris

Not my favorite, but I did like the content of the poem. It was strong and nicely said. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wow. Such a beautiful poem. I really liked the first few lines in the first stanza, I thought they were just amazing. A well deserved 5/5 Keep it up!

Natalie``

I thought this was lovely and sweet. You conveyed a lot of emotion and imagery in the first 2 stanzas but pulled them together nicely in the final stanza.

Very nice poem. I really like the style and the feelings it converys
5/5
Loretta

Very excellent poem.

Aww.. this is such a sweet poem. I loved it from beginning to end. The flow was really good and didn't seem forced. I'm sure that many people can relate to this to at least some degree. Very beautifully written! 5/5 Keep it up!