To feel your touch

by TheRevelation   Jul 21, 2006


To see you all the time
And know that you`ll never be mine
It breaks my heart to see you with her
Why didnt I concur

I lost you and it felt so wrong
We were meant to be together last on and on
But something wasnt right
So it happened in one night

We were the perfect couple people would say
But little did they know we were drifting away
It felt like my heart had broke into a piece
Our lips ,hands ,and love were released

So now I think of what could have been
And how it all began
You used to make me happy and such
But now I dont even feel you touch

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  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless Watermelon

    I think it needs bigger words. commas would be nice, too. either at the ends of lines, or just in the lines to indicate a pause in order to either create some sort of rhythm or to put emphasis on something.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tite

    I like ya flo and how u rite da rhymez. Remember there is alwayz some1 out there fo u. Keep up da good work and keep ya hed up.

    Stay Playa,
    SC

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow, very good yet very sad feeling of what losing a love can feel like. 5/5 You're a great writer, keep it up!

    Innoc3ntStar

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    GOOD POEM! KEEP iT UP!

    *GiRL iN LOVE

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A really nice poem
    5/5

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