Take Away

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Jul 21, 2006


Take away the medication,
They won't changes these lies,
Take away her wings,
So she can't fly.
Cry her eyes out,
Take away her heart,
This girl isn't going to let go,
Of her what's most apart.
For when you find,
That other half,
You'll never let go;
You'll follow that path.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    In the end I wasn't really sure what you were talking about anymore. The first part is great I just think the idea kind of dies off somewhere past the middle.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wowie! short but jammed pack of amazing-ness. This wasn't my favorite though, and im not just copying what you said...its just not AS amazing as usually...i still loved it though.

  • 18 years ago

    by sчиτнєτι¢__x.

    They won't changes these lies,
    [I think you just mean 'change']

    This was a pretty sad poem. And it was filled with alot of emotion.

    Take away her wings,
    So she can't fly.
    [I really liked those two lines though. They stood out so much to me.]

    Keep up the great work. This was wonderful. 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this poem...it's short but sweet it was terrific! Some times short poems say more then long poems could!! you did a great job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Excellent. Another good one. =]

    keep it up.

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