Excellent. Another good one. =]

keep it up.

I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this poem...it's short but sweet it was terrific! Some times short poems say more then long poems could!! you did a great job! 5/5

They won't changes these lies,
[I think you just mean 'change']

This was a pretty sad poem. And it was filled with alot of emotion.

Take away her wings,
So she can't fly.
[I really liked those two lines though. They stood out so much to me.]

Keep up the great work. This was wonderful. 5/5

Natalie``

Wowie! short but jammed pack of amazing-ness. This wasn't my favorite though, and im not just copying what you said...its just not AS amazing as usually...i still loved it though.

In the end I wasn't really sure what you were talking about anymore. The first part is great I just think the idea kind of dies off somewhere past the middle.