by LadyPearl Jul 21, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Soft river flowing across plentiful keys |
I dont think i should comment on your poems because your a of a much higher standard than me i ithink your poems are so good i might destroy them to comment :O xxx alex xxx |
by Mommy And Me
I read this.. but couldnt really get into it... i didn't understand what i had read after i had read it.. there was nothing to keep me interested |
Amazing poem...i noticed one thing tho...in ur desciption of a Terza Rima u say the order is aba,bcb,cdc,dd but umm... |
by Carmen
How lovely! great work |
I loved the third stanza of your poem, it's so beautiful and so well written. I also loved the imagery, and the word choice is excellent. |