I dun know how any one in their right minds gave this less then a 5!!!!!!!!!! Such poetically dead losers they must be! 5/5 It was very beautiful, and it had excellent description!

Ravyn

I loved it, underrated poem so far I think, it's serious good real poetry
and i've just learned another form of poetry (as I never heard of a terza rima before) so thanks for that as well
:)

I love it ahuh ahuh i love it
5/5
awesome words.
they really speak to you.
thanks again.
~Emah

Wow. This was beautiful! You've done great at this. I'm lost for words. Keep on writing, that's all I can say. =) 5/5

Natalie``

You always had such talent for poetry, you decribe the simplest of things in exsquiset and magnificent detail, truly amazing job, keep up your writing and you have a wonderful vocabulary!

I loved the third stanza of your poem, it's so beautiful and so well written. I also loved the imagery, and the word choice is excellent.

Great job!

XoXo
Gaby

How lovely! great work

Amazing poem...i noticed one thing tho...in ur desciption of a Terza Rima u say the order is aba,bcb,cdc,dd but umm...

fires does not rhyme with tunes and moon for the cdc dd part

I read this.. but couldnt really get into it... i didn't understand what i had read after i had read it.. there was nothing to keep me interested

I dont think i should comment on your poems because your a of a much higher standard than me i ithink your poems are so good i might destroy them to comment :O xxx alex xxx