by Bill Turner Jul 21, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Screams coming from the trunk |
Wow.. you must know plenty about dark peoms, it was very well written, and like Darien ^^ i agree that as it was like a real life scenario, it was all the more terrifying, wow..Great job.. hope you can comment on some of my poems... Kirsty Palmer xx |
by Darien
You know, a lot of the dark poems I read from the younger poets are about blood, gore and other malicious things. Your dark poetry is so different, because it holds more of a true life scenario. You can sense the evil playing out as you read. Great write Bill, it's good to read mature poetry. |
Bill, you need towrite a book. You remind me of Stephen King. This is dark creepy and probably happened at one time or another. As alwasy...perfection |
by Melissa
Oh wow Bill, this was terrifying! Definately a dark write, scary to say the least.. The story itself was a great read, flowed nicely, and a chilling choice of words. Awesome work! |