Oh wow Bill, this was terrifying! Definately a dark write, scary to say the least.. The story itself was a great read, flowed nicely, and a chilling choice of words. Awesome work!

Bill, you need towrite a book. You remind me of Stephen King. This is dark creepy and probably happened at one time or another. As alwasy...perfection

You know, a lot of the dark poems I read from the younger poets are about blood, gore and other malicious things. Your dark poetry is so different, because it holds more of a true life scenario. You can sense the evil playing out as you read. Great write Bill, it's good to read mature poetry.

Wow.. you must know plenty about dark peoms, it was very well written, and like Darien ^^ i agree that as it was like a real life scenario, it was all the more terrifying, wow..Great job.. hope you can comment on some of my poems... Kirsty Palmer xx