Angels Cry

Oh, this is so touching, and so powerful.

The idea of the angels crying is moving because we view them as being so strong, and untouchable, like they take away our pain and comfort us, and we forget to stop and think that they hurt too, and feel the pain of the world really.

I like warning in the first stanza where the birds fly off, this is usually because something is about to come that poses a threat to them and in this case it a storm approaching.

You have gave such a short, but accurate account for the storm, easy to imagine it. Then you end the poem with reinforcing that the angels have indeed been crying, and that is the water which is no falling from the sky.

Another beautiful write.

Great poem, the imagery in it is really stunning. The simplicity of this piece is it's greatest power.
It is very deep and truly beautifully written.
5/5 from me

A very well written poem. Loved the flow and message. Sad, but good.

Dear Angela,

Its sad to know that you are leaving this site. But I personally want to thank you for motivating aspiring poets like me with your great poems. There is so much to learn from these poems of yours. Like always, this poem too has made an impact in my mind. Thanks again. Astalavista...

Aww this is a great peom, and very imaganative! its really good bow you used everyday things.. like rain and lighting ect... keep it up 5/5.. please comment on some of mine... Kirsty Palmer xx