WoW this is really good. I love It its like a story really good JOB keep it up

and thanx for commenting my poem!!

Wow! it had me hooked the whole time! i absolutely love it!

thanks for the comment on mine!

-Mel

Wow, that was intense! i love how you wrote it though, its awesome

Oh my gosh that was....i cant even explain it. i think that was the BEST poem! i cant even explain how good it was to read. i was hooked from the beginning and i didnt want to stop reading at all!!!! you have a gift of writing. keep writing

This poem was....i cant even explain how good it was. i was hooked from the first line! you have a gift with getting readers to say and read it and understand it the whole way through. keep writing.

Oh wow! that was great! u really are a great writer...u tell a whole story with rhymes that seem so natural, and you always capture the feelin and emotion! its great! 5/5!!

Wow....amazing poem, good rythm, lots of emtoion beautifully expressed. It deserves better than 5/5
You are a truly exceptional writer. Good work.

Fabulous... i like the story of this poems and it touch my heart and make me so sad. well all i can say is great job

THIS POEMS ROX

I just want to say aswell good on u for being so damn good at poetry

I just want to say aswell good on u for being so damn good at poetry

This is a very good one i would have to say its better than n e iv heard :) i luve ur poems and stuff its sad cuz ur way better than me plz do keep it up i added you as my fav :) i really enjoy ur feelings and the way you express them plz do keep up