Great work. very well written. keep it up. 5/5

Thats so true...thankyou!

I can totally relate to this poem, and I really like that. It made me feel sad while I was reading it, and I could understand what you meant.

This was my favorite part:

so tears will fall from my eyes
as i cry one last time
and wake up tomorrow to the same old place
everything perfect even the smile
i fake on my face.

By the way, that's a nice title. Actually, the reason I read it.

Good job! 5/5

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby