Falls {Haiku}

by sчиτнєτι¢__x.   Jul 22, 2006


Trees sway in the wind,
As the sun peaks through the cracks,
Gently a leaf falls.

July 22nd 2006,
Copyright © Lee.

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A Japanese poem composed of three
unrhymed lines of five, seven, and
five syllables. Haiku reflects on some
aspect of nature.

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  • 18 years ago

    by sibyllene

    This is so pretty. i love haiku. oh, i have a question - do you mean peeks or peaks? i guess either could work, in its own way. anyway, i really liked it

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I wrote my first Haiku today, and i thought it was good.
    This one is very very good, my friend. I think Haiku's are really powerful, keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Oscar

    Hey, welcome to the site if your new here. this haiku was really good, and i usually don't like haikus. it flowed well and somehow it just stayed with me and i felt it's meaning.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Sweet poem, I lived in Japan for 3 years, this is very short but an awesome poem, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, it is short but so cute,
    great job like alwayssssss

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