A lot of imagery in this Haiku |
Nicely done. Welcome to the sight if you're new. =) I've become more liking of the Japanese Haiku's, and this is really good example. Great job. |
Very good, I loved it! You have a great talent and this Haiku has a lot of imagery, which is hard to get with such a short poem. But you did it so well :) Good job :) 5/5! |
Contagious. |
Beautiful. |
by Welshy
Very short lol... |
Haiku, if done well, can say so much in so little words. You did a great job with this one. :) |
by Goran Rahim
Wow, it is short but so cute, |
Sweet poem, I lived in Japan for 3 years, this is very short but an awesome poem, 5/5 |
by Oscar
Hey, welcome to the site if your new here. this haiku was really good, and i usually don't like haikus. it flowed well and somehow it just stayed with me and i felt it's meaning. |
by Tara Kay
I wrote my first Haiku today, and i thought it was good. |
by sibyllene
This is so pretty. i love haiku. oh, i have a question - do you mean peeks or peaks? i guess either could work, in its own way. anyway, i really liked it |