Great job Lauren, like always your this poem is so great and so deep. well done

I really liked the message of your poem, I can relate to it perfectly. Self esteem is very important and it's so harmful when you don't have it.

This was my favorite part of your poem, I think it's the one that relates more to my life.

everyone else should look away
don't look at my sullen face
and don't you know
every night i pray
for tomorrow to bring a
sunny day

Good job!

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

Great work! i loved this, it was very deep and detailed. i can totally relate. amazing job! 5/5

This was great! You really conveyed the effect of feeling so lost and not having any sense of belief in yourself. The emotion flowing through this was excellent.

Owie that made my heart hurt a little..like, literally. I like the rhyme pattern though. Its really original. When your reading it it doesn't seem like it wll fit, but tehn you read a bit farther and everything fits together perfectly.
Good job =)

Aw. That was sad! I can really relate though. It had a lot of emotions in it.. & It's like.. another version of 'By My Side' lol. That's what it sounds like to me! However, I did like.. 'By My Side' better. But i still like this one. It flowed well. & I didnt find anything wrong with it.

You're a very talented writer, keep it up babe.

Bri.x