Woh this is a deep nature poem! I like the way you gave heaven, the sun and the stars a different action then it was like the consequences of that action... If you get what I mean lol... Take care
- Polly

"The stars gather around in surprise,
They watch aghast as the sun quickly hides,
They watch closely as the moon comes to defy,
Witnessing silently as the burning sun dies."
i thought that was the perfect ending to this wonderful poem...again...i loved it...and...again...your poem had had great imagery...5/5...^.^

All your poems are superbly wirrten with great words that give you an idea of what your looking at.! its really amazing..

Ohh.Ohhh.Ohhh. Ilove the imagery of this poem. It was great. WOnderful write yet again.

You describe sunset as something tragic, it's odd but in a good way.
I'm not sure of the rhyming, it seemed a tad forced.
I liked the second stanza the most but I don't understand the second line. What does "butterfully" mean?
Some good descriptions overall.

I love. Love. Love. This poem. I hate nature poems though for some reason. I only like a VERY select few. Like yours. You managed to relate it to nature but not overwhelm it like alot of people do by using all these nature words to tie there already based nature poem more on nature. Your wording choices are lovely. Great Job. I absolutly adore this poem.

Excellent! This is sooo creative. The flow was wonderful. Great great poem!!!!

Another awesome nature poem. It flowed exceptionally well, really touched me. Well done.
keep writing
xxxxx