Celestial tears

by Deana   Jul 22, 2006


I listened to the rain
One warm summer night
Beating lonely rhythms
Not wanting to see the light

A broken heart
for the loss of someone dear
nature bringing forth emotions
through her stream of celestial tears

as I closed my eyes to sleep
to that steady beating sound
I wondered if the sun was shining
on some distant other ground

If the lonely heart was searching
for the kindred spirit find
If that soul across the oceans
let nature speak upon the mind

I wondered how many lay listening
To this beating of the rain
If by some untold reasoning
My thoughts and theirs the same.

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  • 13 years ago

    by mohamad aref numan

    I like this one

  • 15 years ago

    by Yeka

    Eoe...truly created truly strong too...love it...

  • 16 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Lol well iv done that afew times in the past so i might hav been that some1 out ther. but this was an inspirational poem, your words really allow the reader to delve into your world, the flow was a little broken at times but made fora pleasant read.

  • 16 years ago

    by JR13

    The way u put the words lets me imagine my self doing everything the poem says its crazy cuz ive never felt that way to a poem b4

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    The title of this poem captured my attention - I am sincerely glad i read it. As I read, I could find no flaw within the poem. It was beautifully written, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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