This is excellent! You have a lot of talent..

I loved the poem. It's a bit short in my opinion and I feel a bit like I was left hung in the air (in other words I feel you could have written more), but other than that it was great..

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wow, I really liked this poem, though I'm not sure why. There's something about it that reminds me about myself. Well, this a great poem, and even better because it's an ottava rima, and you put extra effort to write it.

Great job! 5/5

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

Indeed I enjoyed this piece.
a well earnt 5/5
it was vry original.
~Emah

Beautifully worded. I love the sentiment expressed and the image created.

Short and straight to the point...
You should add some more to it...
I like the "Ottava Rima" style and might try some of my own :D

FANTASTIC :)

Great poem with a great meaning, you said alot at this poem.so great

This is a great poem! I loved every word 5/5 keep up the great work

You've got a lot of talent to write this. it all flowed very well and i really liked your use of words, especially the ending, powerful.

5/5

Oooooh... I loved this. You did such a great job on this, especially with the type of poem it is. Seems very.. complicated. Anyways, You did a great job on this. 5/5

Keep the good work up it was a great poem ...check some of mine out sometime if you want

And this poem is a m a z i n g, other than that, im speechless
love and luck mollyjade

Lol! i was so scared there for a second.. i thought you had like deleted all your poems.. *sighs a sigh of relief* lol.. this was really good, i liked it.. the flow worked well and it looked really complicated! nice job taleee! 5/5