by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Jul 22, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
*Dedicated to the person harassing my boyfriend and I. |
by Amber Parker
I thought this was really cool. Kind of odd and unique, whih I especially love. Anyways, I hope to see more of your work soon. :) |
by Darien
Wow, short and simple. That was a great poem. Great use of adjectives. Described everything well. |
by Tara Kay
Another awesome poem, keep it up |
Short but powerful lines! This was amazing hun. Filled with so much emotion. I also really liked the last stanza. I thought it was great. Keep it up! 5/5 |
Wow short but powerful!! i hope all the harrassing that you and you boyfriend are going through stops.. its not right for someone to do.. but good job 5/5 |