My Dreams

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Jul 22, 2006


In my dreams I see you, you are always there,
You tell me that you love me, as you play with my hair.
You tell me of our future, how we'll be one forever,
But then I wake up and realize, we'll never be together.

Don't know why, these dreams won't go away,
I can't help but dream of you everyday.
Dreaming how one day, you and I can be,
But your true feelings I can finally see.

I realize what you feel for me inside,
I know how little you care, that you make me cry.
I don't know what I did, but I'm sorry,
But can't you leave a place in your heart...for me?

So my dreams are my safe place, because I know,
That in them I can see you as our love grows.
So be it if only in my dreams, I'm quite used to this,
I love you, but me you'll never miss..

~*Who Cares?*~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Beautifully written! This has so much emotion in it and the flow works well---Very sad poem, yet good---You have a lot of talent so keep writing-5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Moose

    OK!! That sounds like soooo much better, told you! :p I knew you could make this poem spectacular like all your others. Great job n if I could vote again i'd give it another 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Moose

    Great poetry still worth a 5/5 but one thing , this stanza-

    Don't know why, these dreams won't go away,
    I can't help but dream of you everyday day.
    Dreaming how one day, you and I can be-
    Together. But the truth I can see.

    you said everyday day... kinda a grammer error but not big, and the last 2 lines of that stanza didnt flow. I know you could thing of a better way to right that.... youre like the the superwoman of poetry... But yeah besides that great poem, like i sid 5/5 worthy from the emotion and concept, just if that one stanza was fixed it'd be perfect.

    ~Always
    Bryce

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Good work. I can really relate to this poem.
    'I know how little you care, that you make my cry.'
    I think you might have ment;
    'make me cry'

  • 18 years ago

    by 111308

    Awww! This Was Beautiful! I Loved It...It Was So Sad And The Flow Was Great 5/5
    Love,
    Steph

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