Argh! Nicely done! It didn't flow as well as your's usely do (and I feel bad because I feel like I'm always bashing you, but I don't mean to), but it was amazing nonetheless. This is really how I feel, only I have him... Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Dreaming how on day, you and I can be-
[I think you meant 'one day']

Very sad poem though, written really well. You conveyed these emotions beautifuly. There's nothing that I would change. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Awww! This Was Beautiful! I Loved It...It Was So Sad And The Flow Was Great 5/5
Love,
Steph

Good work. I can really relate to this poem.
'I know how little you care, that you make my cry.'
I think you might have ment;
'make me cry'

Great poetry still worth a 5/5 but one thing , this stanza-

Don't know why, these dreams won't go away,
I can't help but dream of you everyday day.
Dreaming how one day, you and I can be-
Together. But the truth I can see.

you said everyday day... kinda a grammer error but not big, and the last 2 lines of that stanza didnt flow. I know you could thing of a better way to right that.... youre like the the superwoman of poetry... But yeah besides that great poem, like i sid 5/5 worthy from the emotion and concept, just if that one stanza was fixed it'd be perfect.

~Always
Bryce

OK!! That sounds like soooo much better, told you! :p I knew you could make this poem spectacular like all your others. Great job n if I could vote again i'd give it another 5/5

Beautifully written! This has so much emotion in it and the flow works well---Very sad poem, yet good---You have a lot of talent so keep writing-5/5