My footing Ive lost
[I thought you could maybe say 'My feet I have lost' ..It might sound abit better.]

This was a good poem though, I can relate too. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Very nice, ooo your hair looks so cute! :p sorry, random :p

Jesus bless you*

~nicole.

Mmmmm i like it. i think life too complicated and we should just die or something >.> but sadly i dont think our Daddy would aprove of that (or let us into heaven) so keep on plodding. btw i love the phrase "thin air" it makes me think of a calm but bad situation.