Loved It!

So is this to nathan?
Im just wonderin, if u now "love" Him, or its just a poem ya know
But its a great poem
only critique i have for this is ahh
make it a little longer ya know
dont want it too short
cause some viewers jst might see it and then go back cuz they see its too short...
great job
lovely words
5/5
~MF~

I agree make it a tiny bit longer and it'll be great!
It was a cute poem, lots of emotion lol and love were apparent!

Keep on writing!

Mwah