Lol.. Nice ending. It was a great poem too. While trying to make it funny and use great vocab aswell, it turned out really good. Excellent job. Keep up the great work! 5/5

Natalie``

Hmmm.
original.
lol
i like it.
`Emah

You tricked me! I thought the person was going to be a kid!
Hahaz.

Will the teachers be kid?

Kid or kind? just wondering. =D

>black&&blue

Haha that's great, I liked the ending the best.
5/5

Lol. Great ending! It really shows how people can get 2nd guessing without knowing it. Just a lesson I've learned over the years =D Keep it up! You're really very good at this whole poem thinger lol. xoxo

Samantha

Amazing poem.. When I first started reading I thought it was about a new student, I know thats probably what you were hoping for. This poem showed me that everyone gets nervous for something new no matter who they are. Way to go, yet again.

That was definitely a different kind of poem that I have ever read. it was unique and yes, I did get really confused..but its 7am i'm just tired..Lol so maybe it does make sense, just not right now...but it was great, and i loved it! 5/5

To me I guess the funny thing was supposed to be irony funny. I liked how it made the headmaster seem like a kid at first.

Will the teachers be kid?
Hmmm

Lol.. loved the ending, vocab was great, and it was still funny, very enjoyable to read...keep writting, please can you read and comment on some of mine,.. thanks kirsty palmer xx