I didn't like the repetitive nature of how it's written at first but I read through it again and I like it now. The message is right there - to the point and well written. It's just a writing style that many people will either love or hate, just so you know.

I did like this poem, and i can relate, you are so wrapped up in your own problems, you forget that others might be hurting.
a very good poem, flowed very well
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I like that you wrote this from the perspective of a bad friend, not like you were the one being treated badly. It's sad when we forget to be there for our friends despite all they do. I really enjoyed this poem! Excellent job! Jpoet*