I watched you die

by hayley   Jul 22, 2006


I watched you scream
i watched you cry
i watched you painfully as you die

i watched the blood
on the floor
asking what you did this for

but you cant hear me
your body is numb
as you lay there beside your gun

as i took a deep breath
and tried not to cry,
i said good-bye to the love of my life.

i said even though we'll soon be apart, always and forever youll be in my heart!

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  • 18 years ago

    by **~xoxo~**

    That was amazing!!!! wow so much power and so much image... 5/5 for sure

  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    It's short...but really powerfull...i think the 3rd verse is the best...ur a good writer