Burnt out

by Chris   Jul 22, 2006


Give me a reason, to believe in love again
Ill never see you as anything above a friend
you had the chance to hold on but you slipped
I pictured us walking together with no chance if I tripped.

And I was right, not saying that you were never
But this time I was clever enough to see right through the weather
these cloudy days only bring the better out of the both of us
our relationship was built on honesty so we were always close to trust

Most of us don't see the reasons behind all your actions
this disguise that you put on is just a simple distraction
whats the difference, its too late to try to fix what was broken at the start
smell the incense, the candles are burnt out, and so is my heart..

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    This was good, but i found some of the rhymes were forced, maybe you could try writting freestyle and see how that works out for you. I did however like the theme you had, good work.

    --Steph

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    That had a really good ending I think I might have to read it again though because I don't think I got the full meaning of it. but good job. and in one part the ryhmn seemed little forced "And I was right, not saying that you were never
    But this time I was clever enough to see right through the weather"
    but I don't know matbe its just me.

    ~~Retniapdoolb

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    That was awesome, it was really good, and sad. I thought it was very well done
    keep it up, my friend

    Tara-Kay

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By Chris