Written on the Wall of the Unconcious Mind

by Unforgiven Retniap doolb   Jul 22, 2006


**Another short write but I like it.

I don't want to remember,
but I must write to forget,
let paper hold these memories,
a method I might regret.

These thoughts won't let go of me,
The poison of my fear,
recurrences of the nightmares,
the won't erase year after year.

So please God let these words,
suck all the venom from my veins,
help my write and move on,
so I can get past my pains.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    I can definetley relate to this, it was sad but also kind of different just like the other one..i really liked this one yes, it is short but sometimes the shorter the better! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, I'm sure a lot of people can relate. I know that's why I write some of my sad poetry. To forget things. Good stuff. Short, Simple but straight to the point.

  • 18 years ago

    by put the [boom boom] into my heart

    Great job! its really nicely written i really like it xo

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Wow, that was really good, it was short but powerful and i enjoyed reading it, keep it up, my freind
    xxxxxx

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