Wow, that was really good, it was short but powerful and i enjoyed reading it, keep it up, my freind
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Great job! its really nicely written i really like it xo

Hmm, I'm sure a lot of people can relate. I know that's why I write some of my sad poetry. To forget things. Good stuff. Short, Simple but straight to the point.

I can definetley relate to this, it was sad but also kind of different just like the other one..i really liked this one yes, it is short but sometimes the shorter the better! 5/5