Longing dreams

by angelina   Jul 22, 2006


The thoughts we have shared,
all the times we have cared.

Friends till the end,
but not without sins.

Till the time we are deseased,
i pray this feeling never beats.

The love that we share,
all the pain we have to bear.

For our lives they have teared,
with out even a care.

But we will stand stong,
not doing what they do wrong.

The easy way out we will not take,
we stay here to remind those who are fake.

We live with this shit so we can fight on, on to the place we have loved for so long.

For this is the place we get away,
where we have prayed every night to stay.

All the pain is gone when it seems, that all we are living for is one big dream.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Adelle

    A very good pome with a lot of emotion it was an enjoyable read glancing over the titles of some of your poems they seem rather long.

  • 17 years ago

    by Isabelle

    I really liked this poem. I felt a lot of different things here. Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    ''All the pain is gone when it seems, that all we are living for is one big dream.''

    That was so beautifully written!
    I enjoyed the flow and rhyme scheme and the imagery was great.
    I think you did a great job on this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Great poem! It's written really well. The last stanza was amazing. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    Spelling errors.

    I'm sorry to tell you that I was not impressed. The message was there, which I love, but it could have been better.

    I'll read one of your latest and hope to see improvement!

    :)

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