I dont understand some of the words, but it is fun to read!

Good job. A lot of words that I did not understand at first but then I found it all out. Great job. =D

>black&&blue

Very nice. Great used of vocab in this one aswell. There's nothing at all that I'd sugest to be changed. It's great the way it is. Keep it up! =) 5/5

Natalie``

I like the old fashioned language in this poem, i find it harder to write like this so it shows talent that u do it so well

-biscuit-

Well...To tell you the truth, I really didn't understand most of it xD. Probably because of the way you used the text with all the "thy's" and...things lol. I'm not used to Shakespearish kind of poems. But good writing anyways! 4/5 Keep it up! xoxo

¤ Samantha ¤

The old english adds a mythical attraction to this well written mysterious dark poem

....it is a masterpiece in my opinion