Dark Corners

by goddess-glamourpuss   Jul 22, 2006


I have a special secret place
Somewhere I like to go
A place where I can be myself
And let my feelings flow
It isn't very far away
In fact it is quite near
One day I may just take you there
And show you things to fear.
You think that I am candy sweet
And generally I am
But when I'm inn my secret place
That image is a sham.
For in the darkest corer
Buried deep inside my head
There is my special secret place
Where I can dream you dead.
Where I can live out fantasies
Of violence and death
I alone responsible
For your gasping dying breath
Other times I'm not so wild
Something of a bore
For I just imagine seeing you
Lying bleeding on the floor.
But when I'm feeling naughty
Then I'm at my best
For I invent countless ways
To put you to the test.
As I gaze into your eyes
Something I would try quite soon
Is whether I could scoop them out
With just a small teaspoon.
So tell me darling what you think
Of dark corners in my mind
Seeing me differently from now on
May benefit you I find.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hazel

    Thanks for appreciating my work.
    I read this work of your and the first few lines were exactly the same with the essay I wrote long time back.I thought it was the same...but its not.
    Yours is straightforward true and the comical effect was awesome.I hope I can write like that!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicholas

    Loved the graphic imagery. that thing about the eyes and the spoon, common, but well put. altogether I give it a 5/5!! Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stumbling Shaman

    Whoa, now if there is such a thing as good creepy, I find it encapsulated in these few lines. I'd like to brush it off and say "aw, how cute," But I'm afraid...

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Oh wow!! this is spectacular, soo dark!! it reminded me of the movie 'saw' a bit haha with the ways to putr you to the test part, i loved it!! perfect flow and yeah, your fantastic at writing dark poems, i loved it, such talent that you have ^^ keep writing ok!!!

    xoxo Lucy

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    But when I'm inn my secret place

    [[Should be "in" ..not "inn"]]

    I liked this poem, too. Speshly the first few lines, they really dragged me into the poem. Excellent job once again. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

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