Wow, there is so much hidden hate in this poem that I actually enjoy it! kudos!

This part really stood out to me:

So tell me darling what you think
Of dark corners in my mind
Seeing me differently from now on
May benefit you I find.

Very powerful piece. I like it. Keep it up..

P.s-thnx for rating and commenting most of my poems. meant a lot. =D

>black&&blue

Wow this is great , the rhythm is flawless, remaining controlled throughout and the rhyming is so subtle it makes the piece flow very nicely.

i love this bit -
'As I gaze into your eyes
Something I would try quite soon
Is whether I could scoop them out
With just a small teaspoon'

-biscuit-

A great poem with deep emotion,
I really like it. you have done a great job there.

This is really good, very scary though. please read and comment on mine

[For in the darkest corer
Buried deep inside my head
There is my special secret place
Where I can dream you dead.
Where I can live out fantasies
Of violence and death]

^^ That was my favourite part. I could really relate to it very much. As you've seen with my "anger" poems I like to call them xD

LOVE it! It's so...angry. Lol. Great job with expressing your feelings on paper...or screen. I could really relate. 5/5 =) Keep it up! xoxo

¤ Samantha ¤

Very interesting work, everyone no matter how sweet they look has a darker side and the people who say they dont have one are lying and are usually more dark than the rest. I loved the way you wrote this because each and every single word had me hanging on until the end of it and that very rarely happens anymore. Thanx for such a tremendously chilling read.

Holy Moly! That was the best poem I have read today...It was brilliant I am really speechless, it was amazing the rhythm and flow was perfect not a thing i would change..I wish i could say more but it's just like WOW!!! That is my feeling on it! definitely 5/5

You are a fantastic writer who clearly deserves the high ratings you have.

Goddess --
You`re rhyming poems are great! I think if I were you I`d break this up into stanzas - it makes it a lot easier for the reader. But otherwise, great job! 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Very goood! I really like your style. You are very talented and I love the way your poems bring you deeper and deeper in your reality. 5/5
Loretta ps thanks for commenting on my poems

Wow ~ I LOVED this poem. To be honest the reason I liked it so much is because I can relate to it right now. I feel this way about someone and you basically just hit the nail on the head for me. Great job!!! 5/5

Omg that's scary... A couple of spelling errors you should check but apart from that it's great. You have a talent for really capturing dark poems... 5/5
Polly

It was very dark but i liked it especially the end ... its one of my favorites . .. keep it up

Omg, so much hate within this, very dark, i wouldnt like to be the victim.
i went all wierd and tingly.
xxxx

This is a really good poem... very dark and siniter.. The way I like it.. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

You have to be one of the better writers ive read from. every piece ive read so far is excellent. i dont know what to say. excellent job.
Driver

Wow thats wow...hate hate hate....poems are the best way to experss that for sure...keep it up ! wonderful job

But when I'm inn my secret place

[[Should be "in" ..not "inn"]]

I liked this poem, too. Speshly the first few lines, they really dragged me into the poem. Excellent job once again. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Oh wow!! this is spectacular, soo dark!! it reminded me of the movie 'saw' a bit haha with the ways to putr you to the test part, i loved it!! perfect flow and yeah, your fantastic at writing dark poems, i loved it, such talent that you have ^^ keep writing ok!!!

xoxo Lucy