Beautiful. A timely reminder warmly expressed.

OMG I LOVED THIS! This is the best thing I've read in awhile because it's so different from everything you read and it speaks so strongly... EXCELLENT job.

xDarkSucidex 5.5

I think this poem is awesome. it is short and simple and really made me think. i love that.

chelsea

I very much injoyed your poem, it was short but it carried a strong message!!

This poem drew me right in. I could see in my mind the picture you drew with your words. How nice it would be to go back to those days. You truly have a gift.

ricky black

5/5 and I have only one more poem to vote and comment on :)

Wow..GREAT poem!