I take it back...this is my fav...ur a wonderful writer...u really should get ur stuff published in a book...

Wow this is good stuff
u should be a famous poet
i can so relate to this
5/5
keep it up
-Misty

Wonderfull flow and style.
This is a great poece. Keep it up.

I really like this one. i love the flow and the way you kept your poem going. thanks for the comment..i try my best..anyway love your work..keep up your awesome writting
xoxo
Kay

Hmmm......intresting,very interesting.

october xx