by Phantasmagoria Jul 23, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Bullets |
Great it's really good and the rhyming is good. :) |
by Love Panda
Excellent-sheer brilliance. |
O, by the way 5/5 =-D |
This is really good-yet really sad---I love the last stanza the best-It wraps the poem up well---Great write! Keep it up and Stay Strong-- |
by Megan
I think this is my favorite of the ones i have read of urs... |