YOU MY SOUL MATE??

by Hurtingsoul   Jul 23, 2006


It was you..................
yes you tripped into my life
my arms.....................
it was your look..............
the look you gave me with your eye
your eyes.......
it made me..................
made me wonder why
why? It was you?
You! walked into me under the sky
Destiny?

It was you..
My arms..
It was your look..
Your eyes..
It made me..
Made me Know why ...
you waltz into my life
Meant to be?.....????

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  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    This was a very good original poem. But you might want to edit the tittle to : your my soul mate. Instead. I like the flow of this poem, but it gets kind of confusing. It might be that way to me because I've never read a poem like this before. But I did enjoy the read so 5/5 for your great work.
    Keep it up!

    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Drew

    You have a brilliant talent. a way with words i have never seen before your poetry speaks to me and i can hear it.5/5

    Thank you,
    Drew

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