You have a brilliant talent. a way with words i have never seen before your poetry speaks to me and i can hear it.5/5

Thank you,
Drew

This was a very good original poem. But you might want to edit the tittle to : your my soul mate. Instead. I like the flow of this poem, but it gets kind of confusing. It might be that way to me because I've never read a poem like this before. But I did enjoy the read so 5/5 for your great work.
Keep it up!

Letty