My Other Half

by SilenceBreaksTheHeart   Jul 23, 2006


I love you so, my other half,
your the one that makes me laugh.

Your in my heart, your in my soul,
your the one that makes me whole.

You make me grin, you make me smile,
your the one that makes life worthwhile.

Hug me tight, erase the pain,
your the one that keeps me sane.

Smile at me, hold my hands,
your the one that understands.

Talk to me, whisper in my ear,
your the one that I hold dear.

Kiss me sweet, hush my screams,
your the one that's in my dreams.

Love me too, destroy the hate,
your the one, my soul mate.

***I think I'm getting better at love poems and the such xD comment and tell me what you think. Thanks

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  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I think you did a really great job with this one. It was very romantic and had a great feel throughout. And I love the line, "Kiss me sweet, hush my screams." I thought that was beautiful. Keep it up! 5/5
    ~Jules

  • 18 years ago

    by jessy

    What do you mean your only getting better? your poems are amazing! i love em...i cannot relate to any of your love poems becuz i have never been with the person i love(he lives in the u.k) but yeah your poems are amazing...oh and thank you for the comment on my poem

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    It's good. (better than mine) thankz for commenting my poems :) we do kinda write different. he he he. lol.

    Adrian ('',)

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