The Darkness

That's really cute. I usually hate nature poems cause I feel they are not detailed enough or not even really about nature in the end. I liked this one though. You captured wonderful images. :]

I liked this, especially the second line, that was so original. It was short but it really worked, portraying the images well. The only problem I have is the fourth line seems to be forced rhyme as "begins fainting" doesn't make all that much sense.
Thanks for sharing.

This one is really good too

Oh wow...this is excellent...it's very unique...it has great imagery...i especially liked this part...
"He reaches out to distinguish the light,
And takes over as the sun begins fainting.
He beckons gently to the whispering stars,
They giggle softly that they are waiting,"
anyways...i loved your poem...5/5.

Very nice poem:):)...short and sweet and to the point=D
my favourite lines were:
"He reaches out to distinguish the light,
And takes over as the sun begins fainting."
they had a certain special wording to them:):)
Good Poem!!