Simply lovely! 5/5

Ravyn

Wow. I love the imagery in this.
So many poems have been written about dusk but you give it a wonderfully refreshing twist.
Fantastic job 5/5

Wow! Hun, this was beautiful. You've done an excellent job with this! Your wording was fantastic, and you followed the strict rhyming and syllable count very well. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Well done, this was a very good poem and i enjoyed it
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I love it. The ability to animate inanimate objects is a gift that language gives us and few use. This was very well written.

XDarkSuicidex --
Another great poem! Ottava Rima`s are a really good format for poetry - I`m glad you decided to use it. It held a lot of emotion and imagery ;; it was great!
It was nice getting to read your poetry, maybe I`ll read some more when I get a chance! You`re an amazing writer, please, don`t ever forget that I told you that. 5/5 for sure.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

"He beckons gently to the whispering stars,"

That line needs to rhyme with 'night' and 'light'. That's how the Ottava Rima works. Good stuff though. I liked the imagery.

Really beautiful nature poem, really gives us a visual to go along with the words.

This an amazing poem as well, it is just delightful. I really enjoyed reading it, I love nature, and I love night. Threfore I love the moon and the stars. You described them so beautifully and I really could feel the nature in my mind.

Great job!

XoXo
Gaby

Its great the way you give everything a personality.I think you have real talent.

5/5.. I like these poems. They mean so much!

This poem brought a smile to my face! I like how you gave objects personalities and human qualities-- My favorite line is:

"They giggle softly that they are waiting"

=D I love it 5/5

Beautiful..

Very nice poem:):)...short and sweet and to the point=D
my favourite lines were:
"He reaches out to distinguish the light,
And takes over as the sun begins fainting."
they had a certain special wording to them:):)
Good Poem!!

Oh wow...this is excellent...it's very unique...it has great imagery...i especially liked this part...
"He reaches out to distinguish the light,
And takes over as the sun begins fainting.
He beckons gently to the whispering stars,
They giggle softly that they are waiting,"
anyways...i loved your poem...5/5.

This one is really good too

I liked this, especially the second line, that was so original. It was short but it really worked, portraying the images well. The only problem I have is the fourth line seems to be forced rhyme as "begins fainting" doesn't make all that much sense.
Thanks for sharing.

That's really cute. I usually hate nature poems cause I feel they are not detailed enough or not even really about nature in the end. I liked this one though. You captured wonderful images. :]