Gorgeous.
I've never had such a beautiful poet comment so nicely on my work
:D
thanks hunny bunch
~Emah
xxoo

Well, i didnt really understand this.. but that is probably just me.. hehe.. it flowed well and the descriptions were good. nice job! 5/5

Not my favorite of yours, but the ending was beautiful. That really made the poem.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5