This was good.. it showed how you were really feeling and flowed pretty well.. there are a few site errors that you could correct such as "Iâ??d"

Is that to much to conceive
^should be "too" not "to" the first time

Lied awake, a slave to your resemblance
^should be "lay" not "lied"

nice job! 5/5

Ey,i dont plan to go anywhere with poems i mean none of my friends ever think ive written a poem in my life so i do this to chill.