Deception

by Jasmyn   Jul 23, 2006


The things you would tell me
i simply believed
without even thinking
i was being deceived
i had no clue
that you would leave
and so silently
my heart does grieve
for what i lost
i never truly had
and even knowing that
inside I'm still sad
you told me you loved me
and you really did care
and so i let you in on my secrets
i didn't want to share
what was clearly wrong
i thought was right
so in the end what I'm missing
wasn't worth the fight
but inside theres a loss
i don't want to feel
for i was in love
and thought it was real
you fed me your lies
and said your good-byes
but still i cant stop these tears
falling from my eyes
and so i weep for me and for you
and for the deception
you put me through
afterwards ill be stronger
i already know
but first its time
for me to let go.
i gave you my trust my love
i gave you me
but now i know
and its deception i see.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    I just read your latest poem and thought i'd check out your other stuff - so far i am as astounded as the first time. your poetry rocks!
    Ginnie x

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    That was a very well written poem..id put in the commas where they needed to be and make slight rewording but other than that it was great. thx for ur comment and i kno how deception feels..its explained in my poem "charades."
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Porcelain

    5/5

    I like this one alot. i've read several of your poems and you have a lot of talent, and thank you for commenting some of mine. I'm most definantly going to add you to my favs!

    -sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by KN

    This is a great poem. You write so well. Keep up the good work. And thank you for commenting on some of mine.

    Good luck with everything,

    :: Kyanne