This is a great poem. You write so well. Keep up the good work. And thank you for commenting on some of mine.

Good luck with everything,

:: Kyanne

5/5

I like this one alot. i've read several of your poems and you have a lot of talent, and thank you for commenting some of mine. I'm most definantly going to add you to my favs!

-sarah

That was a very well written poem..id put in the commas where they needed to be and make slight rewording but other than that it was great. thx for ur comment and i kno how deception feels..its explained in my poem "charades."
love ya lots,
sore

I just read your latest poem and thought i'd check out your other stuff - so far i am as astounded as the first time. your poetry rocks!
Ginnie x