Ooooh i LOVED teh ending!! omg it was brilliant. Emma, I LOVE YOU!! this poem rocked my world ; )
ttyl!!
-Snoo

Great imagery. No real criticism for this one. I reall like the last line of the first stanza - it's nice and bold.

Oh my God, where does all this deep beauty come from... all of your peoms are so excellent, I'm just awe-struck! Thank you for sharing your work!

Ravyn

You know what I've noticed with your poems, with the rhyming, it doesn't even feel like you trying to rhyme anything, it all just comes naturally, untill I look over it a 2nd time, and realise you were rhyming. You're a great writer, and I hope you know that. This was another great piece. Keep it up.

Natalie``