wow you have such talent. this poem was amazing, truly, it was. I am in love right now with someone i live in chicago and he lives in canada, gosh its so hard but i fight the miles that seperate us because i truly love him. If the same thing is happening with you then try your best not to loose him because you should never give up on love. Good luck 2 you and keep writing wonderful poems, take care.
~*Mara*~