by Bret Higgins
The story the poem tells is a very good one. I like the premise and the way you expressed yourself here. |
by NATALIE
VERY NICE YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER KEEP IT UP |
by Danny
Your poem has a openness that i think anyone would find hard not to understand, your poem flows in an elegant and coherent manner and |
Wow, i thought this poem was great ,i mean u better whatch out or ur gonna become a famous poet one day .... |
by NightElf
Very good indeed. |
Wow that was deep i really loved it! keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5/5 |
Great poem. Sad.. Mmhm. I liked it |
by derek
I thought it was great at first it was borring but it got better and better |
by derek
I thought it was great at first it was borring but it got better and better |
by derek
I thought it was great at first it was borring but it got better and better |
Its good.... 5/5 i wish i culd write this good.. keep it up |
by EVIL_TEASE
Wow this ones good to u should always keep writing i really mean that! |
by G A Darkened
Your the best writer i have come across.. |
Wow.. that was amazing.. you wrote it so well.. just reading this took me into another world, you are a great poet, and i wish that you would keep writting, you deffinalty got talent.. Best wishes.. |
by Sondos
That was bloody brilliant! So wonderful, so mystical and such a lovely twist at the end |
I loved it, your a very talented writter. Keep it up :) |
Wow this poem is really good..soo much meaning and truth to it...keep up with writting have fun...please comment and rate my poems..thanks...~DARK~ |
by Boy
Thts really gr8 work... i really feel so gr8 during rreading it. gd wrk take care |
by Boy
Very gd wrk. forget to say chk my poems |