by Natalie Jul 23, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
A Tear of pain fills up her most beautiful eyes, |
Wow... this was nice |
Keep up the good work |
by Tammie
I saw your comment on my poem of the same name, and decided i'd come to read yours. =] It's amazing how two people can write a poem, with the same title, and yet each are so different. You did an excellent job, such emotion and the story you told through the poem is well written. i love how the last two lines are repeticious, and it always works. My favorite line is: |
by Jessica
Aww, wow, taleee.. that was amazing hun.. and so sad.. wow.. the descriptions were stunning, they literally left me speechless.. the flow is perfect and i love the repitition of the last two lines in each stanza.. ily, hunny! 5/5 |
by Megann Lee
I have to say. I am a huge fan of Dark poems. They are probabely one of my favorite types of poems. So I really loved this and how you wrote it, and the wording as usual. |